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Most recent edit on 2005-11-04 11:55:11 by EschaTon

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- Overall, I am happy with my roommate and the reasons I chose her. I am glad with my roommate,the reason why I chose her, and what I went through in making my decision

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- Overall, I am glad with my roommate and the reason why I chose her and what I went through in making my decision



Edited on 2005-11-04 11:53:42 by EschaTon

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- In addition, 70% of all day cares use televisions as a substitute for an outside activity where kids can expend energy.

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- Another thing that doesn’t help the fact that children watch way too much television and are becoming less active and obese is the fact that 70% of all day cares use televisions as an activity for children instead of an outside activity where kids can expend energy and just be active.



Edited on 2005-11-04 11:50:12 by EschaTon

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- Not only is too much television a risk to a child’s health, it is also a risk to their psychological development. By the time that they have finished elementary school, the average child will have watched or heard of over 8,000 murders on television. The average young person sees 200,000 acts of violence on television by the time they are 18, 40,000 of which are murders. Young people that watch too much television exhibit the same symptoms as someone who has a serious substance abuse problem. The reason for this is that they both show the same symptoms which include: using TV as a sedative, indiscriminate viewing, feeling loss of control while viewing, feeling angry with oneself for watching too much, inability to stop watching, and feeling miserable when kept from watching ("Teaching Science" 1). Childhood obesity has led 11% of children to be at risk for many health problems and serious diseases such as heart disease, most of which they know nothing about, and it’s all because of the television. Studies have shown that in 4 hours of Saturday morning cartoons, there wereover 200 advertisements for junk foods. When children see these ads they don’t think about the consequences of them eating the foods in them and how unhealthy they could be for them, all they think about is how much they want whatever is on the television. I would say that 90% of what is being advertised is very unhealthy to a child.



Edited on 2005-11-02 11:26:31 by EschaTon

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- Not only is too much television a risk to a child’s health, it is also a risk to their psychological development. By the time that they have finished elementary school, the average child will have watched or heard of over 8,000 murders on television. The average young person sees 200,000 acts of violence on television by the time they are 18, 40,000 of which are murders. Young people that watch too much television exhibit the same symptoms as someone who has a serious substance abuse problem. The reason for this is that they both show the same symptoms which include: using TV as a sedative, indiscriminate viewing, feeling loss of control while viewing, feeling angry with oneself for watching too much, inability to stop watching, and feeling miserable when kept from watching ("Teaching Science" 1). Childhood obesity has led 11% of children to be at risk for many health problems and serious diseases such as heart disease, most of which they know nothing about, and it’s all because of the television. Studies have shown that in 4 hours of Saturday morning cartoons, there wereover 200 advertisements for junk foods. When children see these ads they don’t think about the consequences of them eating the foods in them and how unhealthy they could be for them, all they think about is how much they want whatever is on the television. I would say that 90% of what is being advertised is very unhealthy to a child.

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- Not only is too much television a risk to a child’s health, it is also a risk to their psychological development. By the time that they have finished elementary school, the average child will have watched or heard of over 8,000 murders on television. Another fun fact is that the average young person sees 200,000 acts of violence on television by the time they are 18; 40,000 of which are murders. Young people that watch too much television show the same symptoms as someone who has a serious substance abuse problem. The reason for this is that they both show the same symptoms which include: 1) using TV as a sedative; 2) indiscriminate viewing; 3) feeling loss of control while viewing; 4) feeling angry with oneself for watching too much; 5) inability to stop watching; and 6) feeling miserable when kept from watching.( Teaching Science page 1). Childhood obesity has led 11% of children to be at risk for many health problems and serious diseases such as heart disease, most of which they know nothing about, and it’s all because of the television. Studies have shown that in 4 hours of Saturday morning cartoons, there was over 200 advertisements for junk foods. When children see these ads they don’t think about the consequences of them eating the foods in them and how unhealthy they could be for them, all they think about is how much they want whatever is on the television. I would say that 90% of what is being advertised is very unhealthy to a child.



Edited on 2005-11-02 10:31:34 by EschaTon

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Edited on 2005-10-31 12:01:03 by EschaTon

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-Whether he was a convincing orator or the German people wanted someone to blame, they did what he said.
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Edited on 2005-10-26 12:03:34 by EschaTon

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- We have increased our government spending to more than 20,000% times the amount on military spending than on everything else. The government has increased military spending to 200 times that of all other budget items.

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- We have increased our government spending to more than 200 times the amount of money on military spending than on non-defense energy spending



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